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0. Not Just Yet by =nose-dive:iconnose-dive:





Got nothing to lose but time.
Forgot the world and myself in my bed today.
Cigarette in my teeth, lungs full of tar.
Goddamn, it's a good way to die.

Chip on my shoulder, a bounce in my step.
My end is coming, but it's not here yet.
Heaven in a bottle, at least my kind.
It's not hard to be happy when you're living in your mind.

And as the sun's falling, I know it's not too late.
It's all coming together, all you've gotta do is wait.
And when you realize it's a wonderful night,
Oh, just take it from me --
Light one up, breath it all in --
Oh, and then you'll see.

All your regrets, all your mistakes,
They don't mean shit when you can't awake.
And I live it up, waiting for the end --
I'll live it up, because I'm not done yet.

And as the sun's falling, I know it's not too late.
It's all coming together, all you've gotta do is wait.
And when you realize it's a wonderful night,
Oh, just take it from me --
Light one up, breath it all in --
Oh, and then you'll see.

And when it comes, you know it will,
You might cry, you know you will.
And when I die, it'll be with a smile
With a flourish is the only way to end this bastard's style.
©2008-2010 =nose-dive
:iconnose-dive:

Author's Comments

An experiment -- I don't usually write song lyrics.

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:iconcmj603:
This is seriously beautiful.

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Urieligion is my addiction.

Well, I don't really remember, but I remember it being very pleasant. And something about duckies, as well.
:iconfinder77:
LOL, nice one! :D

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Innocence is sexy.

~Writers-Critique

Avatar by ~Aikin
:iconmisanthropyreavealed:
This is some primo shit!
You and me are smoking people, yeah? :D

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Oh.
[link]
I've always wanted to be a rocket ship.
:iconnose-dive:
:3 This is a separate character, hahah
But yesssss, I do imbibe from time to time
:iconfrancine1991:
Wonderful. :aww: I love the rawness of the style and wording... I know it isn't one you put up for featuring, but is it OK if I use this in the feature?

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...and you can consider that the end of the matter.
:iconnose-dive:
Of course, no problem at all
You can do whatever you'd like with it, beside saying you wrote it XD
:iconfrancine1991:
:lol: Fear not! I'll note you when I put it up :)

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...and you can consider that the end of the matter.
:icondominantdoberman:
:D This is a great poem!

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"Going to church doesn't make you a Christian any more than going to the garage makes you a car." --Laurence J. Peter
:iconnose-dive:
=] Well, thank you!
And Francine1991 for finding it, hahah

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